Poetry Challenge #318-Caution! Experimentation in Progress
How often do you shift-select keys at the top of your keyboard when writing poetry? Input an ampersand? Willy-nilly asterisk? Better yet, because Oct 18th is National Cupcake Day—add an exclamation point—let’s do it!
Don’t know and can’t find much by way of biographical information about the Challenge Prompt poet of the week, but what we have managed to find is intriguing:
Carol Snow was born on Oct 18, 1949, and she lives in San Francisco! That’s reason enough to bust out the cupcakes—
Happy Birthday Carol Snow!
After a lot of clicking I found one photo of the poet Carol Snow (not to be confused with the novelist of the same name).
So why choose Carol Snow to be the inspiration
for this week’s challenge?
Carol Snow is currently alive and writing. She has published 4 or maybe 6 volumes of poetry (depending on which online source you check) including Placed: Karesanui Poems (Counterpath Press, 2008), The Seventy Prepositions (University of California Press, 2004), and Artist and Model (Atlantic Monthly Press, 1990) . . .
& for her work, Snow has been honored with a Pushcart Prize, Poetry Center Book Award and Joseph Henry Jackson Award in Literature.
What’s more she taught at UC Berkely in 2002 (and for all I know she may well still teach there.)
& her poetry is different, in technical terms we call her an “Experimental Poet.” From what I’ve seen she utilizes more computer keys and white space that many poets . . .
Here’s how Wikipedia* puts it:
Experimental literature is a genre of literature that is generally "difficult to define with any sort of precision."[1] It experiments with the conventions of literature, including boundaries of genres and styles; for example, it can be written in the form of prose narratives or poetry, but the text may be set on the page in differing configurations than that of normal prose paragraphs or in the classical stanza form of verse.[1] It may also incorporate art or photography. Furthermore, while experimental literature was traditionally handwritten, the digital age has seen an exponential use of writing experimental works with word processors.[1]
Here’s one more poem by Carol Snow before we get to the challenge:
Poetry Challenge #318
Caution! Experimentation in Progress
Fanny Howe, who Wikipedia named “one of the most widely read of American experimental poets,” describes Snow’s work as
“post-traumatic—half-seen, half-remembered, half-named—the event more than half gone….
Picture a traumatic incident. It can be one from your life. Or someone else’s. Or perhaps, a traumatic incident involving a cupcake.
Now, write a poem about that incident—but do as Carol Snow might –write only part of it. Write it so it’s half-seen, half-remembered, half-named. Experiment with punctuation to invite readers to fill-in-the half-memory.
If you find this kind of experimentation challenging, draw inspiration from Carol Snow’s poetry.
Set Your Timer for 7 Minutes
Start Writing!
Don’t Think About it, Write It!
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Cindy Faughnan and I began this 7-Minute Poetry Challenge 2700+ days ago. Now we take turns creating prompts to share with you. Our hope is that creatives—children & adults—will use our prompts as springboards to word play time. If you join us in the Challenge, let us know by posting the title, a note, or if you want, the whole poem in the comments.
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Poetry Challenge #317-Digging Up Fossils
Fossils are the preserved remains of a once-living thing from a past geological age. Sometimes they’re actual creatures, and sometimes they are impressions preserved in rock that show what the creature looked like.
Why am I sharing this?
Because October 11th is. . . National Fossil Day!
Even the National Park Service celebrates Fossil Day! Click over later for a list of NPS ways to celebrate fossils!
Fossils are found in Rocks
Fun Fossil ideas can be found at playideas.com.
Here are 25 Fun Fossil Ideas for Kids
There are books about Fossils. Here’s my personal fav: Old Rock (is not boring) by Deb Pilutti:
And my all-time favorite Rock on his way to becoming a Fossil:
Fossilization is also in the works for Nobel Prize winning novelist & poet Francois Mauriac, who coincidentally or not, was born on National Fossil Day: Oct 11, 1885. As a precursor to this week’s prompt let’s start with some of his words that should be etched in rock:
Poetry Challenge #317
Digging Up Fossils
Maybe you have old notebooks/files containing fossilized poems, poems written in another time in your life.
Find an old notebook or file—the older the better—and read through some of your old writing. See if you can find something that has preserved an impression of a different time or feeling. Using that “fossil”, write a new poem.
You can use some of the actual words or write new and capture a feeling or impression of the original.
Set Your Timer for 7 Minutes
Start Writing!
Don’t Think About it, Write It!
Cindy Faughnan and I began this 7-Minute Poetry Challenge 2700+ days ago. Now we take turns creating prompts to share with you. Our hope is that creatives—children & adults—will use our prompts as springboards to word play time. If you join us in the Challenge, let us know by posting the title, a note, or if you want, the whole poem in the comments.
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What Inspires Me? Pumpkin Maniacs
Anytime someone says you can’t make a living doing what you love,
just say:
“Pumpkins!”
Marc Evans and Christ Soria carve pumpkins for a living. Last year they carved pumpkins for all the suites in Yankee Stadium. And carved a Mike Myers pumpkin ala the Halloween Movies that became a cover of Newsweek. And so many more.
They are Maniac Pumpkin Carvers!
“Maniac Pumpkin Carvers started out as a labor of love but quickly spiraled into something that is so much more.
Founders, Marc Evan (@marcmaniac) and Chris Soria (@chrissoria), high school buds who shared an obsession for Halloween.
Each year they spent weeks transforming a section of the school into a series of successfully terrifying Haunted Houses. Later, while both studying at Parsons School of Design, the duo rekindled their love for Halloween by discovering a passion for pumpkin carving. “—from the website: About — Maniac Pumpkin Carvers
And get this: We can be pumpkin carving Manic’s too.
Maniac Pumpkin Carvers teach classes! In person and online. Here’s the Class Info!
Maniac Pumpkin Carving! Now that’s inspiring!
Poetry Challenge #316-Come Together
John Lennon probably doesn’t need an introduction. As a co-founder of The Beatles with Paul McCartney, he (and the group) became famous in the 1960’s. He wrote many, many songs for the group, and many more after The Beatles broke up.
Born as John Winston Lennon on October 9th, 1940*, in Liverpool, England, little did his parents know that their son would become one of the most famous musicians of the era. John spent his childhood in a suburb of Liverpool with his aunt, as his parents had separated when he was five years old.
*Full Disclosure: when we decided on featuring John Lennon in this week’s prompt, we thought his birthday was Oct 6th, because that’s what some Internet Search brought up. That info was incorrect. John Lennon’s birthday is Oct. 9th. (Maybe whomever wrote it first read it upside down) Moral: check your sources!
Anyhow…Lennon’s work is worth celebrating for more than one day—why not Lennon all week?!
Anyone who says songwriters are not poets read on. Below are partial lyrics for Imagine. Listen to Imagine-click!
John & Yoko’s Honeymoon, Bed in for Peace, from March 25 to March 31, 1969.
Poetry Challenge #316
Come Together
This prompt may find you humming and tapping your foot! Listed below are titles of some of the songs Lennon wrote. Choose 3-5 titles and incorporate them into a poem of your own. Extra credit if you create a catchy rhythm or rhyme.
Set Your Timer for 7 Minutes
Start Writing!
Don’t Think About it, Write It!
And whenever you’re in NYC, take a stroll up Central Park West to visit Strawberry Fields, listen for the music!
Cindy Faughnan and I began this 7-Minute Poetry Challenge 2700+ days ago. Now we take turns creating prompts to share with you. Our hope is that creatives—children & adults—will use our prompts as springboards to word play time. If you join us in the Challenge, let us know by posting the title, a note, or if you want, the whole poem in the comments.
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Fin Pal's Write the Finniest Letters
Isn’t Malise’s letter great! And she draws fintastic pictures, too! Even when finpals don’t ask questions, Norman sends an answer.
Ready to read Norman’s answer? Scroll down . . .
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But first a finny:
Q: Why did Norman go to circus school?
Q: Why did Norman go to circus school?
A: He wanted to be a Clownfish.
Do you have a question for Norman the Goldfish- about friends, school, pets, family, life in and outside the fishbowl? Send him a letter!
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Poetry Challenge #315-Get Happy!
So maybe you aren’t old enough to remember rushing home to crowd around the TV Friday nights because The Partridge Family was on!
Hello, world, hear the song that we're singin'
C'mon get happy!
A whole lot of lovin' is what we'll be bringin'
We'll make you happy!
The big swoon was David Cassidy, the oldest brother/lead singer/best hair flipper of all time… (well, of the Partridge Family anyway) but dang, Shaun was the cute one. Right?
WRONG!
Shaun Cassidy born September 27, 1958, was David Cassidy’s half-brother and the son of Jack Cassidy and Shirley Jones—the Partridge Family’s mother.
But he was not, as everyone thought, the youngest brother on the show. Shaun Cassidy wasn’t even on the show.
Maybe that’s reason enough for him to get happy. For while nobody anywhere know what happened to any other of those Partridge Kids, one need only click the remote to find out what Shaun baby has accomplished. He has created/written/produced scads of TV series including American Gothic, Roar, Invasion, and New Amsterdam. He has albums. Acted in The Hardy Boys Mysteries, Breaking Away and General Hospital. What’s more, Shaun is a poet.
Need more convincing? He sang Do You Believe in Magic?
Poetry Challenge #315
Come on! Get Happy!
Take a moment to think of all the words you possibly can that rhyme with happy. If you need help, pull out a rhyming dictionary—on-line or otherwise. Once you have a list of 5-10 words, weave them into a poem.
And then, because we absolutely know you have time left on the clock, rearrange and repeat words to give your poem a snap-happy rhythm.
Set Your Timer for 7 Minutes
Start Writing!
Don’t Think About it, Write It!
Post-poeming reward yourself with a sing-along. Click on the link to view the lyrics included version of The Partridge Family Theme Song.
Nothing’s better than being together/when we’re singing
When we’re singing!
Cindy Faughnan and I began this 7-Minute Poetry Challenge 2700+ days ago. Now we take turns creating prompts to share with you. Our hope is that creatives—children & adults—will use our prompts as springboards to word play time. If you join us in the Challenge, let us know by posting the title, a note, or if you want, the whole poem in the comments.
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THE GRAND PRIZE WINNER of the Summer 2023 Quarterly Giveaway is . . .
But first an apology: Forgive me for being tardy in plucking a winner for this quarter. No excuses.
Drum roll please!
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The good news is you made our fishy hearts flutter with joy.
The better news is, there weren’t as many entries as their could have been—did you forget you could enter more than one time each quarter?—so all of you who did enter have a 1-37 chance of winning. Talk about great odds!
In the interest of fairness, we wanted choosing the winner to be completely random-random drawing. We asked this guy to pick a winner.
But he wouldn’t take the bait. . .
So, we popped all the entries into our trusty champagne bucket. . .
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To all of you, There’s still next time! Enter now, enter often, even better—have your kids, students, second-cousin on your goldfish’s side enter. There is no limit to how many times you enter—or WIN the Quarterly Winner-Choice Giveaway!
Poetry Challenge #314-See What to Do with It…
Today we’re veering a bit to the dark side of poetry, and maybe the biggest challenge of all: editing.
Dum-duh-dum-dum….
Why ever for? Because whether you know it or not, modern literature such as it is, IS because of today’s birthday boy, Maxwell Perkins. And if any of our poems IS going to be something they will need some of what he was: a thoughtful editor.
Maxwell Perkins was an editor at the publishing house Charles Scribner’s Sons.
He discovered and edited:
F. Scott Fitzgerald (The Great Gatsby),
Ernest Hemingway (The Old Man and the Sea),
Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings (The Yearling), and
Thomas Wolfe (Look Homeward Angel).
Many of the books Perkins edited became best sellers and award winners; many of the authors Perkins discovered became household names.
Want to know more: A. Scott Berg’s biography makes excellent reading!
Kenneth D. McCormick, editor-in-chief of Doubleday & Company once said:
“Perkins was unlikely for his profession: He was a terrible speller, his punctuation was idiosyncratic, and when it came to reading, he was by his own admission ‘slow as an ox.’ But he treated literature as a matter of life and death.”
If, like Perkins, you’re “slow as an ox” but want to know more about him watch Genius, a 2016 movie starring Colin Firth is about his relationship editing Thomas Wolfe. (Colin, Jude, Nicole, Laura…the cast is reason enough to watch!)
Here’s the trailer for Genius—fascinating watching!
But for now, enough avoiding the inevitable: By now you will have already followed—many many times over in the course of this challenge—what I consider Perkins’ finest pin-up advice:
“Just get it down on paper, and then we’ll see what to do with it.” ― Maxwell Perkins
Poetry Challenge #314
See What to Do with It…
In honor of Maxwell Perkins’ birthday, Sept 20th, it’s time to use your editing skills. It’s said that Maxwell Perkins forced Thomas Wolfe to cut 90,000 words from his first novel (although some sources think that’s an exaggeration). However, we often use too many words, and our writing would be better if we tightened it.
Choose a poem you’ve written that has at least 50 words. Now take out ¼ of those words—if it’s a 50 word poem, try to get it to 38 words. You can delete words or change a phrase to one word—whatever works to get to your new word count. Read the new poem aloud. Is it better? Can you cut another ¼ of the words?
Set Your Timer for 7 Minutes
Start Writing!
Don’t Think About it, Edit!
After you’re finished editing, reward yourself with this delightful read about Perkins on Lithub!
Cindy Faughnan and I began this 7-Minute Poetry Challenge 2700+ days ago. Now we take turns creating prompts to share with you. Our hope is that creatives—children & adults—will use our prompts as springboards to word play time. If you join us in the Challenge, let us know by posting the title, a note, or if you want, the whole poem in the comments.
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